January 6, 2007

  • Talking to a teacher helps

    Postcardsd2-revised  

    Here is the revised card with some help from my teacher brother in law. Melissa-I think I got all the grammer errors and no I am not offended since I know I have a problem with spelling and grammer I always have. The computer was the best thing that happend to me in High School. Spell Check is my savior. I just wish photoshop had it!

    I think this sounds better. Let me know what you think.

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  • Sounds great!!  The only think I am questioning is that first line, doens't quite sound right to me.  Maybe try "when you choose Garden Rose Photography to capture your wedding day"  or "when you choose Garden Rose Photography to photograph your wedding day".  Not sure what it needs, but it doesn't quite roll off the tongue quite right.   And the "I try" part, just simply state "I strive".  When is your show??? I have the big Minneapolis one tomorrow (sun) and I am excited.  I haven't done it in about 3 years.  I usually book about 10 weddings off the big show, so wish me luck!!!

  • The Show is February 3rd just one week after we get back from Naseau. I am trying to get everything figured out before we leave on the 20th. YIKES! I have a radio ad to right and record too!

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