Number 1 is by FAR my favorite. I think it is just the type of image that brides love these days. I like how the DOF puts the rings as the main focus. I'm glad you narrowed it down to these two shots and I like that you left out the roses behind the name. It looks much cleaner that way and lets your eyes settle more on the photograph of the couple. I love your slogan too. "Come into the Garden" sounds so.....I can't think of how to say what I want to say. It just sounds like your are inviting your potential customers to join you somewherre mysterious, beautiful and exciting. Love it! Good luck at the show.
Oooo, I really like it. I didn't particularly like your "logo" before, I felt it was a little distracting, this is MUCH cleaner and simpler!! I am voting for #2.
haha ... melissa's comment is funny ... it makes me laugh to think of you saying "join me somewhere mysterious ..." hilarious! But I love "come into the garden" - I think its very inviting and intimate. Number ONE is definitely my favorite of the two. No doubt ... its way more about the couple and less about the building/location/atmostphere. I like the image in number two - but am distracted by the word "BANK" - and maybe that word sends the wrong message. My only critique on the layout is that there seems to be a lot of negative space - though your logo and text is really clear and thats a good thing. It might be too distracting, but Id like to see it with at a least a soft color or even a very translucent image filling the whole background. Even without that - I think it looks sharp and I wish you the best!
I also like how the logo is clearer and slogan is awesome! Good luck with the show.
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Number 1 is by FAR my favorite. I think it is just the type of image that brides love these days. I like how the DOF puts the rings as the main focus. I'm glad you narrowed it down to these two shots and I like that you left out the roses behind the name. It looks much cleaner that way and lets your eyes settle more on the photograph of the couple. I love your slogan too. "Come into the Garden" sounds so.....I can't think of how to say what I want to say. It just sounds like your are inviting your potential customers to join you somewherre mysterious, beautiful and exciting. Love it! Good luck at the show.
Oooo, I really like it. I didn't particularly like your "logo" before, I felt it was a little distracting, this is MUCH cleaner and simpler!! I am voting for #2.
haha ... melissa's comment is funny ... it makes me laugh to think of you saying "join me somewhere mysterious ..." hilarious! But I love "come into the garden" - I think its very inviting and intimate. Number ONE is definitely my favorite of the two. No doubt ... its way more about the couple and less about the building/location/atmostphere. I like the image in number two - but am distracted by the word "BANK" - and maybe that word sends the wrong message. My only critique on the layout is that there seems to be a lot of negative space - though your logo and text is really clear and thats a good thing. It might be too distracting, but Id like to see it with at a least a soft color or even a very translucent image filling the whole background. Even without that - I think it looks sharp and I wish you the best!
I also like how the logo is clearer and slogan is awesome! Good luck with the show.
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